Thursday, June 17, 2010


Hannah wrote a story about fishing. Her learning intention was to add adjectives and similes to make it descriptive for the audience.



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  1. AnonymousJune 22, 2010 at 10:25 AM

    I'm impressed at your big story. I think you used some good adjectives like stripy, gently and brown. Brodie LC9

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  2. Jaime Duker lc8June 24, 2010 at 4:33 PM

    Awesome story Hannah!Really good words ! Keep it up Hannah

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